Jules - Revision history

MissFluffyKitty at 05:27, 9 July 2013

2013-07-09T05:27:05Z

MissFluffyKitty at 00:16, 3 May 2013

2013-05-03T00:16:44Z

Jerry: Linked title to story

2013-01-15T18:11:48Z

Linked title to story

Jerry: Small fix here and there

2013-01-15T18:11:10Z

Small fix here and there

MissFluffyKitty at 21:30, 10 January 2013

2013-01-10T21:30:35Z

Jerry: Linked to Spiritual Malaise and small change to avoid contradiction.

2012-06-24T10:46:43Z

Linked to Spiritual Malaise and small change to avoid contradiction.

Jerry at 15:46, 10 March 2012

2012-03-10T15:46:08Z

KuiperFrog at 17:55, 6 March 2012

2012-03-06T17:55:12Z

KuiperFrog at 09:24, 19 January 2012

2012-01-19T09:24:59Z

KuiperFrog at 04:54, 19 January 2012

2012-01-19T04:54:38Z

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 {{Character
   | Affiliation = Steel City Workers
   | Role = Master Engineer
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   | Trait = A little quick tempered
   | Nature = Careful
 }}
 Head engineer of [[Steel City]], Jules is the one to work with all of the machines to make sure they're properly maintained and functioning well. She's highly skilled in this, as well as any electrical work that needs to be done. She teaches engineering to her students, though she tries to prevent them from learning the engineering required to run the city, for fear of one of them pulling a nasty prank and messing up the city's machines.
-=[[Spiritual Malaise]]=
+=Spiritual Malaise=
 After receiving a corrupt message from one of the many Porygons that help run the technology in Steel City, Jules contacted [[Blaine]], the shiny Porygon-2 who is in charge of all of the other Porygons, to see if he could explain to her the (so far) unknown "Error 99". Receiving no response from Blaine, she hurried up to the main server room, in hope of having better luck in contacting Blaine and fixing the error that would cause, she concluded, two trains to collide.
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 =Gallery=

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 {{Character
   | Role = Master Engineer
   | Location = Steel City

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 Head engineer of [[Steel City]], Jules is the one to work with all of the machines to make sure they're properly maintained and functioning well. She's highly skilled in this, as well as any electrical work that needs to be done. She teaches engineering to her students, though she tries to prevent them from learning the engineering required to run the city, for fear of one of them pulling a nasty prank and messing up the city's machines.
-=Spiritual Malaise=
+=[[Spiritual Malaise]]=
 After receiving a corrupt message from one of the many Porygons that help run the technology in Steel City, Jules contacted [[Blaine]], the shiny Porygon-2 who is in charge of all of the other Porygons, to see if he could explain to her the (so far) unknown "Error 99". Receiving no response from Blaine, she hurried up to the main server room, in hope of having better luck in contacting Blaine and fixing the error that would cause, she concluded, two trains to collide.

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 =Spiritual Malaise=
-After receiving a corrupt message from one of the many Porygons that help run the technology in Steel City, Jules contacted [[Blaine]], the shiny Porygon-2 who is in charge of all of the other Porygons, to see if he could explain to her Error 99. Blaine failed to respond to Jules right away. She hurried up to the main server room, in hopes of having better luck to contact Blaine and fix the error that would cause two trains to collide.
+After receiving a corrupt message from one of the many Porygons that help run the technology in Steel City, Jules contacted [[Blaine]], the shiny Porygon-2 who is in charge of all of the other Porygons, to see if he could explain to her the (so far) unknown "Error 99". Receiving no response from Blaine, she hurried up to the main server room, in hope of having better luck in contacting Blaine and fixing the error that would cause, she concluded, two trains to collide.
-Once in the room, Blaine began to materialize into a physical in front of Jules but he was not himself. Blaine did not return to his normal senses until after the two trains had crashed into each other. She asked the Porygon-2 to explain what was Error 99, but Blaine claims that there was no such thing.
+Once in the room, Blaine began to materialize physically in front of Jules but he was not himself. Blaine did not return to his normal senses only after the two trains had crashed into each other. She asked the Porygon-2 to explain what was "Error 99", but Blaine claimed that there was no such thing.
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 Head engineer of [[Steel City]], Jules is the one to work with all of the machines to make sure they're properly maintained and functioning well. She's highly skilled in this, as well as any electrical work that needs to be done. She teaches engineering to her students, though she tries to prevent them from learning the engineering required to run the city, for fear of one of them pulling a nasty prank and messing up the city's machines.
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-==See Also==
+=See Also=
 [[Spiritual Malaise]]
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-==Gallery==
+=Gallery=
 <gallery>
 File:Shikaro 5.png
 </gallery>

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-Head engineer of [[Steel City]], Jules is the one to work with all of the machines to make sure they're properly maintained and functioning well. She's highly skilled in this, as well as any electrical work that needs to be done. She teaches ... select students in her spare time in order to make sure that the city will have Pokemon who can maintain the machines in the next generation.
+Head engineer of [[Steel City]], Jules is the one to work with all of the machines to make sure they're properly maintained and functioning well. She's highly skilled in this, as well as any electrical work that needs to be done. She teaches engineering to her students, though she tries to prevent them from learning the engineering required to run the city, for fear of one of them pulling a nasty prank and messing up the city's machines.
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   | Move3 = Fake Out
   | Move4 = Volt Tackle
-  | Trait = Little Quick Tempered
+  | Trait = A little quick tempered
   | Nature = Careful
 }}

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	Head engineer of [[Steel City]], Jules is the one to work with all of the machines to make sure they're properly maintained and functioning well. She's highly skilled in this, as well as any electrical work that needs to be done. She teaches ... select students in her spare time in order to make sure that the city will have Pokemon who can maintain the machines in the next generation.		Head engineer of [[Steel City]], Jules is the one to work with all of the machines to make sure they're properly maintained and functioning well. She's highly skilled in this, as well as any electrical work that needs to be done. She teaches ... select students in her spare time in order to make sure that the city will have Pokemon who can maintain the machines in the next generation.
		+	{{clr}}
		+
		+	==Gallery==
		+	<gallery>
		+	File:Shikaro 5.png
		+	</gallery>