Gambitville - Revision history

MissFluffyKitty at 22:37, 26 June 2013

2013-06-26T22:37:24Z

Jerry: Changed structure a little to be a bit more formal

2013-06-07T05:35:01Z

Changed structure a little to be a bit more formal

JWNoctis: Jury's icon by PurpleKecleon

2013-06-05T01:14:38Z

Jury's icon by PurpleKecleon

JWNoctis: Reflecting new orders

2013-06-03T05:14:38Z

Reflecting new orders

MissFluffyKitty at 04:31, 3 June 2013

2013-06-03T04:31:54Z

MissFluffyKitty at 18:52, 2 June 2013

2013-06-02T18:52:01Z

MissFluffyKitty at 07:39, 2 June 2013

2013-06-02T07:39:24Z

MissFluffyKitty at 06:10, 2 June 2013

2013-06-02T06:10:03Z

MissFluffyKitty: spelling

2013-06-02T05:52:41Z

spelling

MissFluffyKitty at 05:33, 2 June 2013

2013-06-02T05:33:41Z

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 [[File:Icon Donahue.png|50px|link=Donahue]]
 [[File:Icon Savannah.png|50px|link=Savannah]]
 [[File:Icon Syrup.png|50px|link=Syrup]]
   | Missions =
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 ==Missions and Events==
 ===A Thirst for Gold===
-At an unspecified point in time, [[Syrup]] paid a visit to a Gambiteville saloon, on behalf of a Krokorok named [[Mac]]. Some time during her drinking (which had no negative effects on her due to her typing), a Seviper named [[Guld]] entered the saloon. He declared it was his time to drink and told Syrup to leave or face him. The Skuntank had no interest in leaving her drink and challenged the villain. After Guld attempted to kill Syrup with Trump Card, but Syrup was somehow unaffected, and she was able to kill Guld by forcing his own tail through his throat. Later on, Syrup claimed the bounty that had been on Guld's head, removed his tail for a trophy, and asked the saloon bartender, a Cacturne named [[Donahue]], to turn his lifeless body into a stew.
+At an unspecified point in time, [[Syrup]] paid a visit to a Gambiteville saloon, on behalf of a Krokorok named Mac. Some time during her drinking (which had no negative effects on her due to her typing), a Seviper named [[Guld]] entered the saloon. He declared it was his time to drink and told Syrup to leave or face him. The Skuntank had no interest in leaving her drink and challenged the villain. After Guld attempted to kill Syrup with Trump Card, but Syrup was somehow unaffected, and she was able to kill Guld by forcing his own tail through his throat. Later on, Syrup claimed the bounty that had been on Guld's head, removed his tail for a trophy, and asked the saloon bartender, a Cacturne named [[Donahue]], to turn his lifeless body into a stew.
 ===Reprieve===

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 The most notable landmark in Gambitville, aside from the abandoned ranch, is the well.
 [[File:The Well.png|250px|left|thumb|The Well]]
-It rests in the center of the town, and has for as long as anyone can remember. Actually... it was said that the well was there long before the town's establishment, as well - however many decades or centuries that was.
+It rests in the center of the town and has been there for as long as anyone can remember. It was actually said that the well was there long before the town's establishment, as well.
-The well is made up of pieces of solid gold, with large, carved rubies adorning the eyes of the... what is it, exactly?
+The well is made up of pieces of solid gold, with large, carved rubies adorning the eyes of a Giratina. Surprisingly, any attempts at destroying, altering or removing pieces from this well have been met with failure. Failure comes in many forms: sometimes intense headaches will befall the vandalizing-would-be, and other times, the potential-criminal will forget what they were doing right in the middle of the act.
 For a while now, Pokemon of Gambitville have made mental notice of newcomers who enter saloons already with a splitting headache - they're usually suspected of having tried to steal from the well.
-If you can get over the menacing appearance, however, it's pretty reliable as a source of water. Underneath run a deep system of underwater rivers and caves, nicknamed "the Styx," as Pokemon who fall into the well rarely return.
+Besides its menacing appearance, the well is a reliable source of water. Underneath runs a deep and complex system of underwater rivers and caves, nicknamed "the Styx," as Pokemon who fall into the well rarely return.
-There's supposedly an old, abandoned boat down there, and has been for ages.
+An old, abandoned boat is said to be somewhere in the depths of the well.
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   | Area = Tao World
-  | NPCs = [[File:No Icon.png|50px|link=Jury]]
+  | NPCs = [[File:Icon Jury.png|50px|link=Jury]]
 [[File:Icon Andy.png|50px|link=Andy]]
 [[File:Icon Nile.png|50px|link= Nile]]

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   | Area = Tao World
-  | NPCs = [[File:Icon Gold.png|50px|link=Gold]]
+  | NPCs = [[File:No Icon.png|50px|link=Jury]]
 [[File:Icon Donahue.png|50px|link=Donahue]]
 [[File:Icon Savannah.png|50px|link=Savannah]]
 [[File:Icon Mac.png|50px|link=Mac]]
 [[File:Icon Syrup.png|50px|link=Syrup]]
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 [[File:No Icon.png|50px|link=Jury]]
 [[File:Icon Andy.png|50px|link=Andy]]
-[[File:No Icon.png|50px|link= Nile]]
+[[File:Icon Nile.png|50px|link= Nile]]
-[[File:No Icon.png|50px|link= Huckleberry]]
+[[File:Icon Huck.png|50px|link= Huckleberry]]
-[[File:No Icon.png|50px|link=Charon]]
+[[File:Icon Charon.png|50px|link=Charon]]
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   | Stories = [[A Thirst For Gold]]<br>[[Reprieve]]
   | Links = [[Opal]]<br>[[Mike]]<br>[[Maple]]<br>[[Agave]]
-}}Gambiteville is a town in Tao World located in the middle of the [[Sandsong Desert]], North of Alomomola City. It serves as a place to rest from traveling within the desert, and a hot spot for outlaws to gather.
+}}Gambitville is a town in Tao World located in the middle of the [[Sandsong Desert]], North of Alomomola City. It serves as a place to rest from traveling within the desert, and a hot spot for outlaws to gather.
 Prior to inheriting both [[Tao Village]] and [[Alomomola City]] from his brother, [[Agave]] ran a ranch here and set up a small shop.